Wednesday 16 October 2013

Quick write- happy ending

After the little duckling fell down the sewer hole, the mother and the other ducklings panicked. They quickly found a long piece of string, and I mean a very long string. They lowered the string down the sewer the duckling grabbed a hold of it, half way up the sewer there was a ledge with a army of rats on it the rats tried to eat the duck but the duck amazingly had super powers and kicked all the rats buts! The duck finally reached the top and gave a huge hug and kiss to the mother and they all lived happily ever after.

3 comments:

  1. Hahaha your story has a happy ending that's for sure! could thing your duckling had super powers or it wouldn't have made it! i really enjoyed your creativity

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  2. Your happy ending was the best of what I read, what type of superpowers did those lil guys have?

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  3. He had super strength dude, a human couldn't do nothing to it.

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